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Post by Fallenbelle on Sept 24, 2014 15:07:42 GMT
Because apparently I have nothing better to do.... www.fanfiction.net/s/10713027/1/VisitationsThe final installment in the "Conversations" trilogy. I've rated it "M" to be safe, because there's brief mention of nudity and vague sexual acts. But not much-it's no "Pas de Deux." To be honest, I don't think it's my favorite, but since I'm trying to improve.... |
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Post by snacky on Sept 24, 2014 16:18:04 GMT
Because apparently I have nothing better to do.... www.fanfiction.net/s/10713027/1/VisitationsThe final installment in the "Conversations" trilogy. I've rated it "M" to be safe, because there's brief mention of nudity and vague sexual acts. But not much-it's no "Pas de Deux." To be honest, I don't think it's my favorite, but since I'm trying to improve.... Darn it, I don't have time to read it now. Looking forward to later.  |
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Post by snacky on Sept 25, 2014 3:34:34 GMT
Because apparently I have nothing better to do.... www.fanfiction.net/s/10713027/1/VisitationsThe final installment in the "Conversations" trilogy. I've rated it "M" to be safe, because there's brief mention of nudity and vague sexual acts. But not much-it's no "Pas de Deux." To be honest, I don't think it's my favorite, but since I'm trying to improve.... Just finished! Tasty! The last line might be throwing it off a little. Even though cars exist, they might not be common enough to spring to Julia's mind as the metaphor. But I'm glad she finally gets her Bloodlust!William! You got the French kiss in there! |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Sept 25, 2014 14:11:10 GMT
Because apparently I have nothing better to do.... www.fanfiction.net/s/10713027/1/VisitationsThe final installment in the "Conversations" trilogy. I've rated it "M" to be safe, because there's brief mention of nudity and vague sexual acts. But not much-it's no "Pas de Deux." To be honest, I don't think it's my favorite, but since I'm trying to improve.... Just finished! Tasty! The last line might be throwing it off a little. Even though cars exist, they might not be common enough to spring to Julia's mind as the metaphor. But I'm glad she finally gets her Bloodlust!William! You got the French kiss in there! I was thinking drive as in "to control" but a fair a point. I'll have to look it up. Yes, I absolutely had to put the french kissing in there!  I didn't really like this one all that much, but it was sitting on my hard drive for the past week and I was tired of it taunting me. It's gone, now I can focus on other things. |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Sept 25, 2014 16:12:43 GMT
Just finished! Tasty! The last line might be throwing it off a little. Even though cars exist, they might not be common enough to spring to Julia's mind as the metaphor. But I'm glad she finally gets her Bloodlust!William! You got the French kiss in there! I was thinking drive as in "to control" but a fair a point. I'll have to look it up. Yes, I absolutely had to put the french kissing in there! I didn't really like this one all that much, but it was sitting on my hard drive for the past week and I was tired of it taunting me. It's gone, now I can focus on other things. Well wouldn't cabbies also be known as drivers? I feel your pain. But then when it's gone, I just come up with another idea. Vicious cycle. |
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