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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Oct 27, 2014 23:09:52 GMT
Can anyone give some tips on how I might describe making out in Victorian terms? So far, I've only come up with "lengthy kissing session" but I don't know how I feel about that.  Yeah I'm really not sure myself...I doubt I've ever used Victorian terms. What about 'devilish passion' or 'ardent affection' or something along those lines? |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Oct 27, 2014 23:20:16 GMT
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Oct 27, 2014 23:34:42 GMT
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Post by Fallenbelle on Oct 28, 2014 3:04:51 GMT
Can anyone give some tips on how I might describe making out in Victorian terms? So far, I've only come up with "lengthy kissing session" but I don't know how I feel about that. How far is this 'making out' going to go...? Not far.  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Oct 28, 2014 7:19:26 GMT
I don't know about posting the other parts now. People seem to resoundingly hate this one, even you-almighty queen of angst! I've kinda lost interest in it, as I'm not really interested in writing the same fic repeatedly changing only a few details. We'll see. I know it's a different fandom, but angst was the time honored standard in SG-1 fic. Particularly Jack-whumping. By the way - I don't see any hating in the reviews, just angst for you to post the next part! Got a couple of PMs of folks asking why I wrote William betraying Julia. Umm, I have to write all kittens, puppies, and rainbows all the time? |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Oct 28, 2014 14:13:20 GMT
By the way - I don't see any hating in the reviews, just angst for you to post the next part! Got a couple of PMs of folks asking why I wrote William betraying Julia. Umm, I have to write all kittens, puppies, and rainbows all the time? Yup pretty much. Most don't like any angst whatsoever...so I try to put in as much as possible.  Lately I haven't been but normally I do. And this is really silly but could you please fix the title to this thread? The A is driving me insane!  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Oct 28, 2014 15:48:27 GMT
Got a couple of PMs of folks asking why I wrote William betraying Julia. Umm, I have to write all kittens, puppies, and rainbows all the time? Yup pretty much. Most don't like any angst whatsoever...so I try to put in as much as possible. Lately I haven't been but normally I do. And this is really silly but could you please fix the title to this thread? The A is driving me insane! Oops! I never noticed the typo before now. How do I fix a title? I'm looking, but I don't see it. |
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Post by Hodge on Oct 28, 2014 15:53:54 GMT
Can anyone give some tips on how I might describe making out in Victorian terms? So far, I've only come up with "lengthy kissing session" but I don't know how I feel about that. Yeah I'm really not sure myself...I doubt I've ever used Victorian terms. What about 'devilish passion' or 'ardent affection' or something along those lines? Don't know if you've come up with something yet but I vote for combining the above two, ardent passion. |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Oct 28, 2014 16:07:16 GMT
Yeah I'm really not sure myself...I doubt I've ever used Victorian terms. What about 'devilish passion' or 'ardent affection' or something along those lines? Don't know if you've come up with something yet but I vote for combining the above two, ardent passion. ...as he ardently demonstrated his passion? I like that... Yes, I researched the etymology of making out-it's from the '40's. :/ |
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Post by Hodge on Oct 28, 2014 16:12:01 GMT
Don't know if you've come up with something yet but I vote for combining the above two, ardent passion. ...as he ardently demonstrated his passion? I like that... Yes, I researched the etymology of making out-it's from the '40's. :/ Yep, that works....  |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Oct 28, 2014 16:39:03 GMT
Yup pretty much. Most don't like any angst whatsoever...so I try to put in as much as possible. Lately I haven't been but normally I do. And this is really silly but could you please fix the title to this thread? The A is driving me insane! Oops! I never noticed the typo before now. How do I fix a title? I'm looking, but I don't see it. Just click on edit in the first post. |
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Post by snacky on Oct 29, 2014 5:37:36 GMT
Can anyone give some tips on how I might describe making out in Victorian terms? So far, I've only come up with "lengthy kissing session" but I don't know how I feel about that. mrsbrisby's mention of "swooning" seems rather Victorian... |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Oct 30, 2014 16:53:05 GMT
Okay, final chapter posted. It's not my favorite, however, it is my first multi-chapter fic, so I'm giving myself some leeway. If I'm ever gonna write a book, I've got to get used to writing multi-chapter pieces.
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Post by snacky on Oct 31, 2014 5:47:29 GMT
Finally got a chance to read the latter 2 chapters of this - I'm so glad you finished it! Chapter 3 was uber sexy, and the resolution was very sweet.  |
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Lately I haven't been but normally I do. 
Jan 30, 2013 21:44:55 GMT