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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 24, 2014 14:27:10 GMT
www.fanfiction.net/s/10846279/1/The-PaintingChallenge accepted, Snacky and CosmicCavalcade! Title: The Painting Author: Fallenbelle Summary: Julia has quite the surprise planned for their first wedding anniversary. Rating: Teen for descriptions of nudity, language. Author's Note: I must admit, I kind of got this idea after a discussion of Julia painting William in the nude about the same time I saw the Miss Fisher episode "Murder at Montparnasse". This is what happens when those ideas are combined. Vague season 8 spoilers, but pretty much pure imagination and wild, unfounded speculation. Blame Demosthenes23 and Fralinger for this. Unbeta'd-all mistakes mine alone.
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Nov 24, 2014 15:13:16 GMT
loving it so far. the next chap is later today right, for my b-day present?
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 24, 2014 16:28:43 GMT
loving it so far. the next chap is later today right, for my b-day present? Just because it's your birthday, I went ahead and posted chapter 2. Three will have to wait until tomorrow though-but don't worry-the whole story is already planned out-I just need to flesh out the dialogue and details. I hope you remember this when it's my birthday next week!  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 24, 2014 16:57:48 GMT
loving it so far. the next chap is later today right, for my b-day present? Just because it's your birthday, I went ahead and posted chapter 2. Three will have to wait until tomorrow though-but don't worry-the whole story is already planned out-I just need to flesh out the dialogue and details. I hope you remember this when it's my birthday next week! lol you two are so prolific -need to catch up on my evening reading!  |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Nov 24, 2014 17:51:19 GMT
loving it so far. the next chap is later today right, for my b-day present? Just because it's your birthday, I went ahead and posted chapter 2. Three will have to wait until tomorrow though-but don't worry-the whole story is already planned out-I just need to flesh out the dialogue and details. I hope you remember this when it's my birthday next week! lol you actually posted it? aw, i feel so special.  when next week? |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 25, 2014 13:52:07 GMT
Just because it's your birthday, I went ahead and posted chapter 2. Three will have to wait until tomorrow though-but don't worry-the whole story is already planned out-I just need to flesh out the dialogue and details. I hope you remember this when it's my birthday next week! lol you actually posted it? aw, i feel so special. when next week? Next Wednesay-the 3rd. |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Nov 25, 2014 15:44:50 GMT
lol you actually posted it? aw, i feel so special. when next week? Next Wednesay-the 3rd. I think that's a day off of Barbarama's b-day as well. And I know the kind of stuff you two like, high pervitude...so we shall see.  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 25, 2014 15:49:59 GMT
Next Wednesay-the 3rd. I think that's a day off of Barbarama's b-day as well. And I know the kind of stuff you two like, high pervitude...so we shall see. I'm working on chapter 3 right now. But I'm starting to get scared that it's too cliched, too angsty guilty pleasure. Question: do you think William's temper tantrum should be short, or should I draw it out a bit? |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Nov 25, 2014 16:02:43 GMT
I think that's a day off of Barbarama's b-day as well. And I know the kind of stuff you two like, high pervitude...so we shall see. I'm working on chapter 3 right now. But I'm starting to get scared that it's too cliched, too angsty guilty pleasure. Question: do you think William's temper tantrum should be short, or should I draw it out a bit? Anytime they've fought it's been short lived. They're too rational to let emotion take hold for very long. BUT if you made him drunk first...it could be longer. Though making him drunk AND angsty is probably even more cliched than what you had planned. And having him give her the cold shoulder before he blows up is probably the same. I think William would probably try to go detective mode first with her and when she's less than forthcoming blow up in her face temporarily. But if you wanna do something more grand than that, by all means, be cliched. It's not necessarily a bad thing. I've been cliched loads of times myself.  |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 26, 2014 2:56:47 GMT
I think that's a day off of Barbarama's b-day as well. And I know the kind of stuff you two like, high pervitude...so we shall see. I'm working on chapter 3 right now. But I'm starting to get scared that it's too cliched, too angsty guilty pleasure. Question: do you think William's temper tantrum should be short, or should I draw it out a bit? Ok, when are we getting chapter 3!? I don't usually read unfinished stories and I'm beginning to wish I'd waited on this one....  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 26, 2014 3:39:21 GMT
I'm working on chapter 3 right now. But I'm starting to get scared that it's too cliched, too angsty guilty pleasure. Question: do you think William's temper tantrum should be short, or should I draw it out a bit? Ok, when are we getting chapter 3!? I don't usually read unfinished stories and I'm beginning to wish I'd waited on this one.... I'm working on it-I promise! I'm just having a major confidence crisis with W/J's confrontation scene. I'd decided to embrace the cliche in this fic, but now I have serious performance anxiety! |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 26, 2014 3:46:05 GMT
Ok, when are we getting chapter 3!? I don't usually read unfinished stories and I'm beginning to wish I'd waited on this one.... I'm working on it-I promise! I'm just having a major confidence crisis with W/J's confrontation scene. I'd decided to embrace the cliche in this fic, but now I have serious performance anxiety! Be brave, whatever your first instinct was go with it! What was it Mr. B said to William in The Knockdown? Learn to trust your intuition.... |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 26, 2014 6:28:47 GMT
I'm working on it-I promise! I'm just having a major confidence crisis with W/J's confrontation scene. I'd decided to embrace the cliche in this fic, but now I have serious performance anxiety! Be brave, whatever your first instinct was go with it! What was it Mr. B said to William in The Knockdown? Learn to trust your intuition.... Aww, thanks! I will! Also, I'm can I say that I'm surprised you like my fic-I would have thought it too schmoopy for you.  Mind you, I'm glad you do, just pleasantly surprised. |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 26, 2014 6:31:29 GMT
Be brave, whatever your first instinct was go with it! What was it Mr. B said to William in The Knockdown? Learn to trust your intuition.... Aww, thanks! I will! Also, I'm can I say that I'm surprised you like my fic-I would have thought it too schmoopy for you. Mind you, I'm glad you do, just pleasantly surprised. My tastes run to all sorts of things. I have to admit that if the characters don't ring true I can't read them, yours always do. |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 26, 2014 6:36:20 GMT
Aww, thanks! I will! Also, I'm can I say that I'm surprised you like my fic-I would have thought it too schmoopy for you. Mind you, I'm glad you do, just pleasantly surprised. My tastes run to all sorts of things. I have to admit that if the characters don't ring true I can't read them, yours always do. Thanks! Which is probably the reason I'm struggling with the epic Blowup scene CC req'd- it is her birthday present after all. I'm trying to do guilty pleasure while keeping their characterization, which is something I work hard on and it means a lot to me that you think I'm getting it right. |
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