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Post by Hodge on Nov 27, 2014 14:58:43 GMT
Ok, I'm definitely not very patient, I gave in and read Chapter 3.... And now you can go read chapter 4! 5 is halfway done-W/J really haven't argued all that much, so I'm stressing on how to have them argue "in character". Also, thanks for letting me talk myself through the writing process-I seem to like that better than completely writing by myself! PS: Sorry CC! No artists were punched by brooding detectives in the making of this fic. I tried, I really did. It just didn't work. Ooh, now that's leaving me wondering!  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 27, 2014 17:57:48 GMT
And now you can go read chapter 4! 5 is halfway done-W/J really haven't argued all that much, so I'm stressing on how to have them argue "in character". Also, thanks for letting me talk myself through the writing process-I seem to like that better than completely writing by myself! PS: Sorry CC! No artists were punched by brooding detectives in the making of this fic. I tried, I really did. It just didn't work. Ooh, now that's leaving me wondering! Harboring a grudge against those avant-garde flibbertigiggerties?  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 27, 2014 19:31:54 GMT
Ok, I'm definitely not very patient, I gave in and read Chapter 3.... And now you can go read chapter 4! 5 is halfway done-W/J really haven't argued all that much, so I'm stressing on how to have them argue "in character". Also, thanks for letting me talk myself through the writing process-I seem to like that better than completely writing by myself! PS: Sorry CC! No artists were punched by brooding detectives in the making of this fic. I tried, I really did. It just didn't work. A) This is great! B) I almost feel guilty when a fanfic has a lot of plot going on. Thanks for the work you put in, even though I still hate WIPs! C) I do think all the shades would have rolled up when William slammed the door, leading to a rather embarrassing situation for all  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 28, 2014 2:03:16 GMT
And now you can go read chapter 4! 5 is halfway done-W/J really haven't argued all that much, so I'm stressing on how to have them argue "in character". Also, thanks for letting me talk myself through the writing process-I seem to like that better than completely writing by myself! PS: Sorry CC! No artists were punched by brooding detectives in the making of this fic. I tried, I really did. It just didn't work. A) This is great! B) I almost feel guilty when a fanfic has a lot of plot going on. Thanks for the work you put in, even though I still hate WIPs! C) I do think all the shades would have rolled up when William slammed the door, leading to a rather embarrassing situation for all A.) thanks! B.) I think you nailed on how this fic is a departure from my other fics. I started out just wanting to write a guilty pleasure (because we've been spoiling for an epic between them), but I wanted the GP to also be in character as much as possible. I hope the argument accomplishes that, and if it doesn't, I'd really like some concrit. I'm writing these fics because they're fun, but they're also writing exercises. I'd like to write more-maybe even a book someday, but I need to beef up my plot writing first. C.) I think it would have killed William for yet more people to see his wife nude.  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 28, 2014 8:21:49 GMT
A) This is great! B) I almost feel guilty when a fanfic has a lot of plot going on. Thanks for the work you put in, even though I still hate WIPs! C) I do think all the shades would have rolled up when William slammed the door, leading to a rather embarrassing situation for all A.) thanks! B.) I think you nailed on how this fic is a departure from my other fics. I started out just wanting to write a guilty pleasure (because we've been spoiling for an epic between them), but I wanted the GP to also be in character as much as possible. I hope the argument accomplishes that, and if it doesn't, I'd really like some concrit. I'm writing these fics because they're fun, but they're also writing exercises. I'd like to write more-maybe even a book someday, but I need to beef up my plot writing first. C.) I think it would have killed William for yet more people to see his wife nude. Me being the pompous pseudo-intellectual that I am, I love all the side-discussion of art! ITA that it would have killed William for Julia to be put on display for anyone else...which is why this whole scene was making me nervous. But really...there are windows all around William's office...especially this season when everything seems more open and airy! That window shade thing could have happened!  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 28, 2014 12:46:34 GMT
And now you can go read chapter 4! 5 is halfway done-W/J really haven't argued all that much, so I'm stressing on how to have them argue "in character". Also, thanks for letting me talk myself through the writing process-I seem to like that better than completely writing by myself! PS: Sorry CC! No artists were punched by brooding detectives in the making of this fic. I tried, I really did. It just didn't work. Ooh, now that's leaving me wondering! Wonder no more! It's done! |
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Post by randomkiwibirds on Nov 28, 2014 16:58:17 GMT
Ooh, now that's leaving me wondering! Wonder no more! It's done! *cough that last chapter cough* |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 28, 2014 16:59:59 GMT
Ooh, now that's leaving me wondering! Wonder no more! It's done! Make up sex is always the best!  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Nov 28, 2014 17:08:41 GMT
Wonder no more! It's done! Make up sex is always the best! So I take it you guys enjoyed it? I'm not gonna lie, I was nervous about it! |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 28, 2014 17:29:01 GMT
Make up sex is always the best! So I take it you guys enjoyed it? I'm not gonna lie, I was nervous about it! Yes. There was nothing to be nervous about. |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Nov 28, 2014 18:07:24 GMT
So I take it you guys enjoyed it? I'm not gonna lie, I was nervous about it! Yes. There was nothing to be nervous about. George would disagree |
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Post by Hodge on Nov 28, 2014 18:09:09 GMT
Yes. There was nothing to be nervous about. George would disagree Then he'd better find himself a girlfriend quick and he can catch up! Guess Emily's spoken for now though so it won't be her!!  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 28, 2014 19:18:04 GMT
Wonder no more! It's done! Make up sex is always the best! Guys let me catch up with the forum before driving me crazy with curiosity here...  |
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Post by snacky on Nov 28, 2014 19:19:00 GMT
Yes. There was nothing to be nervous about. George would disagree LOL! Did the shades fly up after all? |
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Post by snacky on Nov 28, 2014 19:20:27 GMT
Then he'd better find himself a girlfriend quick and he can catch up! Guess Emily's spoken for now though so it won't be her!! My other prediction was George was going to make a play for Lillian Moss, not understanding the Girl Thing... |
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