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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 4:38:57 GMT
Now there's a 2nd chapter for "As a Man" in my head, and I want to write it! But alas, my professors are demanding that I do my coursework instead. Oh, well-come December and I'm done with this crap!
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 4:41:24 GMT
Now there's a 2nd chapter for "As a Man" in my head, and I want to write it! But alas, my professors are demanding that I do my coursework instead. Oh, well-come December and I'm done with this crap! hahaha! Doesn't it always come down to that! Well thank you for writing an actual fic! Instead of writing a meta paragraph about writing a fic like me. I have discovered thinking about food and thinking about pronz either don't mix well or mix way too well. www.davidlebovitz.com/Dang, I'm starving now, and there's nothing good in the fridge. |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 6:35:33 GMT
OMG SOMEONE CAME UP WITH BAFFLING WILLIAM IN THE BEDROOM WITH A ZIPPER BEFORE I DID!!!!!!! Okay, I have to admit that had at least one x. Still think MM should have it's own Boudoir.com though.  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 13:51:59 GMT
OMG SOMEONE CAME UP WITH BAFFLING WILLIAM IN THE BEDROOM WITH A ZIPPER BEFORE I DID!!!!!!! Okay, I have to admit that had at least one x. Still think MM should have it's own Boudoir.com though. Oh yeah, it's not triple x, but I tend to like my porn somewhat cerebral instead of full-on closeups if you catch my drift. And that's why I rec'd it-I knew you'd read CC's stuff, and this one featured a zipper! |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 16:55:42 GMT
OMG SOMEONE CAME UP WITH BAFFLING WILLIAM IN THE BEDROOM WITH A ZIPPER BEFORE I DID!!!!!!! Okay, I have to admit that had at least one x. Still think MM should have it's own Boudoir.com though. Oh yeah, it's not triple x, but I tend to like my porn somewhat cerebral instead of full-on closeups if you catch my drift. And that's why I rec'd it-I knew you'd read CC's stuff, and this one featured a zipper! I agree, and most of my porn brain cells were actually burned out by cliches years ago. I just like the idea of complete freedom to do anything. I'm just surprised ff.net's M level was that M, hahahaha.  Wait that was CC?  That didn't just *include* a zipper - it included William getting briefly interested in a zipper while in the middle of things that should technically be more interesting! Why does no one say anything while I'm going on as if this is my original idea? And why am I apparently picking up radio waves from CC a thousand miles away? |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 18:46:33 GMT
Oh yeah, it's not triple x, but I tend to like my porn somewhat cerebral instead of full-on closeups if you catch my drift. And that's why I rec'd it-I knew you'd read CC's stuff, and this one featured a zipper! I agree, and most of my porn brain cells were actually burned out by cliches years ago. I just like the idea of complete freedom to do anything. I'm just surprised ff.net's M level was that M, hahahaha. Wait that was CC? That didn't just *include* a zipper - it included William getting briefly interested in a zipper while in the middle of things that should technically be more interesting! Why does no one say anything while I'm going on as if this is my original idea? And why am I apparently picking up radio waves from CC a thousand miles away? No, it wasn't CC. I just tried to think of a good, smutty fic that CC hadn't written and as a written bonus, it featured a zipper.  |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Aug 28, 2014 19:17:43 GMT
there's a zipper in that one? don't recall..so i'll just HAVE to read it again.  |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 19:38:23 GMT
I agree, and most of my porn brain cells were actually burned out by cliches years ago. I just like the idea of complete freedom to do anything. I'm just surprised ff.net's M level was that M, hahahaha. Wait that was CC? That didn't just *include* a zipper - it included William getting briefly interested in a zipper while in the middle of things that should technically be more interesting! Why does no one say anything while I'm going on as if this is my original idea? And why am I apparently picking up radio waves from CC a thousand miles away? No, it wasn't CC. I just tried to think of a good, smutty fic that CC hadn't written and as a written bonus, it featured a zipper. It featured William getting distracted mid-nookie by zipper technology! That's a concept level up! And I feel really unoriginal now.  |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 21:55:02 GMT
No, it wasn't CC. I just tried to think of a good, smutty fic that CC hadn't written and as a written bonus, it featured a zipper. It featured William getting distracted mid-nookie by zipper technology! That's a concept level up! And I feel really unoriginal now. Don't feel bad-just think of it as independent confirmation of your idea that William would totally be distracted by gadgets-even during sex. |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 21:56:38 GMT
there's a zipper in that one? don't recall..so i'll just HAVE to read it again. You poor thing. |
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Post by Fallenbelle on Aug 28, 2014 21:59:49 GMT
I'm blaming the fact that I wrote the original on my iPad, which has a tendency to autocorrect or add things I don't want if I'm not careful. I caught a few from the original, but that last one slipped by. Perils of editing and posting a story at 2 am I suppose, but I have another story brewing in my head and I decided I couldn't work on it until I'd posted this one like I promised. I don't have any 'smart' devices so I never have to deal with this supposed helpful tool. Well, that's not entirely true. Open office does that to an extent, but it's usually just giving me the option for longer words I'm always using, not suggesting random/weird things. Thank you for posting it. I did comment on there too. Excited for your next piece. I saw that! Thank you! I may also be working on a second and third chapter even though I originally planned it as a one off. |
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Post by CosmicCavalcade on Aug 28, 2014 23:02:48 GMT
I don't have any 'smart' devices so I never have to deal with this supposed helpful tool. Well, that's not entirely true. Open office does that to an extent, but it's usually just giving me the option for longer words I'm always using, not suggesting random/weird things. Thank you for posting it. I did comment on there too. Excited for your next piece. I saw that! Thank you! I may also be working on a second and third chapter even though I originally planned it as a one off.No problemo. Credit where credit is due. Ha! I once planned on a simple alternate ending to S4 and then somehow wrote like 10 chaps! And I believe one chap had them naked in a cave fighting wolverines! wtf was I on? But uh, I've got a 'guest' on ff.net who keeps asking me to continue dark places cuz apparently they are dying to know what happens on those two book pages. I wish I knew... |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 23:31:21 GMT
It featured William getting distracted mid-nookie by zipper technology! That's a concept level up! And I feel really unoriginal now. Don't feel bad-just think of it as independent confirmation of your idea that William would totally be distracted by gadgets-even during sex. ROFL! It's also independent confirmation the zipper would be applied to commercial clothing use several decades in advance. |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 23:34:48 GMT
I don't have any 'smart' devices so I never have to deal with this supposed helpful tool. Well, that's not entirely true. Open office does that to an extent, but it's usually just giving me the option for longer words I'm always using, not suggesting random/weird things. Thank you for posting it. I did comment on there too. Excited for your next piece. I saw that! Thank you! I may also be working on a second and third chapter even though I originally planned it as a one off.Since we've confirmed CC didn't write the other one, it won't be impolitic to say I think you have the "voice" down better. The other one sounded a bit out of character, particularly for William: almost as if it were written with a different character in mind. It sounded a bit closer to the Jennings book Murdoch, in fact. Yours left me wondering 24 hours later what they got up to later that evening. |
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Post by snacky on Aug 28, 2014 23:37:39 GMT
I saw that! Thank you! I may also be working on a second and third chapter even though I originally planned it as a one off.No problemo. Credit where credit is due. Ha! I once planned on a simple alternate ending to S4 and then somehow wrote like 10 chaps! And I believe one chap had them naked in a cave fighting wolverines! wtf was I on? But uh, I've got a 'guest' on ff.net who keeps asking me to continue dark places cuz apparently they are dying to know what happens on those two book pages. I wish I knew... You should ask her to join you in Julia's Boudoir and write it herself, hahahaha. |
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That didn't just *include* a zipper - it included William getting briefly interested in a zipper while in the middle of things that should technically be more interesting! Why does no one say anything while I'm going on as if this is my original idea? 
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